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Chpt. 4 Balto fic by ~InvaderZin9098:iconInvaderZin9098:



                                                   Chapter 4
                                                  A new Hero
               Star Walked into rosie's room.He came up to Jenna & Balto. He rested his heat on Balto's chest. His ears pricked up/. "He's still alive!!" He yipped. "well of coures. Who said he was dead?" Jenna asked. "Dagger kept bragging that he killed him." "Show off! But he won't live much longer if he doesn't wake up." Jenna said.Star looked at jenna wirh all the sadness in the world in his eyes. "Well I'd better be off. Miles is gonna wonder where I went." "Goodbye Star." Bye Jenna!"
                As Star walked out he heard somthing behind a fence. Suddenly a femal dog jumped out, knocking him over. She looked like balto but her underside was  all white  and she was a lighter color. "I'm so so sorry!" "it's ok." "I'm Alei. You are??" "Star." "I'm looking for a Balto?" "um... well, " "well what?" She asked "he's kinda ....In a coma..." "Oh No Uncle!" "you're uncle was balto?" Star asked. "Yeh, My father sent me here. He thinks I need Discipline." "well come On!" Star yipped.

                      


      
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Author's Comments

This is where my OC for my fic comes in. ALEI. No i don't Mean Aleu. Alei. i will be posting five soon plz comment

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:iconboltrobankai:
Whew!
I almost thought you stole my Balto's sister idea. Well, that's not really my idea....

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"Dut, dut, dut, GOOSE!"
Drumline: ...we're stupid like that.
:iconinvaderzin9098:
lol... yeh i thought neise would surprise everyone. I hopes it did. this stor's not even at the good part.

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:iconboltrobankai:
Balto almost dying wasn't the good part!?

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"Dut, dut, dut, GOOSE!"
Drumline: ...we're stupid like that.
:iconinvaderzin9098:
kinda,.. The romantic part i mean..

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I LOVE CARTOONS!!!!!!!!

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Spongebob
Chowder
Camp Lazlo
:iconboltrobankai:
Oh, we got to get to the fightin'!!

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"Dut, dut, dut, GOOSE!"
Drumline: ...we're stupid like that.
:iconinvaderzin9098:
k
lol

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I LOVE CARTOONS!!!!!!!!

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